I’m working on something I’d like to have feedback on.
Genre of the story: Science Fiction Fantasy
I have 5 chapters written by hand and the 1st chapter has been typed up.
I’d like to have feedback on 1st chapter.
I want feedback on:
- The main character - What do you think of them?
- Pacing of the chapter
- Part of the NDA
Understand this is a rough draft of the 1st chapter.
If you are interested in providing feedback on the 1st chapter, then send me a pm. Note not all who express interest will be sent a copy of the 1st chapter but I will respond to ever pm. If selected you will be sent a NDA to fill out and send back to me. Once the NDA is filled out, I’ll send you a PDF version of the 1st chapter.