Wolfleben Seeking Writing Feedback [Closed]

I’m working on something I’d like to have feedback on.

Genre of the story: Science Fiction Fantasy

I have 5 chapters written by hand and the 1st chapter has been typed up.

I’d like to have feedback on 1st chapter.

I want feedback on:

  • The main character - What do you think of them?
  • Pacing of the chapter
  • Setting
  • Part of the NDA

Understand this is a rough draft of the 1st chapter.

If you are interested in providing feedback on the 1st chapter, then send me a pm. Note not all who express interest will be sent a copy of the 1st chapter but I will respond to ever pm. If selected you will be sent a NDA to fill out and send back to me. Once the NDA is filled out, I’ll send you a PDF version of the 1st chapter.


Update: I’ve received feedback from a couple different people. It has been what I wanted. I’m awaiting feedback from two other people but I want others to know I no longer need anymore feedback at this time. I’ll still receive it from those people though and use it to make the story better.